Because I could not stop for Death
Because I could not stop for Death, He kindly stopped for me; The carriage held but just ourselves And Immortality.
We slowly drove, he knew no haste, And I had put awayMy labor, and my leisure too, For his civility. ; We passed the fields of gazing grain, We passed the setting sun.
We passed the school where children played, Their lessons scarcely done1
We paused before a house that seemed A swelling of the ground1; The roof was scarcely visible, The cornice but a mound.
Since then 't is centuries; but each Feels shorter than the day I first surmised the horses' heads Were toward eternity.
We passed the School, where Children strove At Recess--in the Ring
but Mabel Loomis Todd, the mistress of Emily's brother Austin Dickinson who found favor with Emily, and Thomas Wentworth Higginson, a literary editor and well-known essayist who Emily saw as a mentor, altered the text to read
We passed the school, where children played Their lessons scarcely done.
preserving the rhyme for the stanza but eliminating "the paradox that leisure involves effort" as stated by Janet Gray in her studies of Dickinson's poetry. Todd and Higginson also altered the sixteenth line of the poem to read
The cornice but a mound;
instead of
The cornice in ground;
in order to eliminate the repetition of the word ground. The final and most drastic change that Todd and Higginson made was to remove a complete stanza from the manuscript version of the poem. Originally there was a stanza placed between the third and fourth stanza's of the version on this web page that read
Or rather--He passed us-- The Dews drew quivering and chill-- For only Gossamer, my Gown-- My Tippet--only Tulle--
These changes that Todd and Higginson made, I feel, were made with the best intentions. They wanted to see Emily's work in print, and her poetry, being fifty years ahead of its time, simply wouldn't make it over the publisher's desk in its original version. Although these efforts to publish Emily's work in the beginning caused much of her original work to be modified to fit the styles of the time period, they at least put her name in the minds of American poetry readers. Eventually, Emily's work was published in its original form taken straight from her manuscripts and these are the scholarly versions that students see in text books today.
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