Compelling Personal Statement
This is the opportunity for you to tell your story. Why do you want to be a healthcare professional? What is your desire? What fueled your fire?
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THINK ABOUT THE FOLLOWING
- Your abilities/skills and how you have demonstrated them throughout your life
- Your personality traits
- Major influences and/or mentors you have had throughout your life
- Short term and term goals as they relate to your story
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ASK YOURSELF THESE QUESTION AS YOU SIT DOWN TO BRAINSTORM
- What is unique, distinctive, and/or impressive about my life story?
- What details of my life have shaped or influenced my goals?
- When did I become interested in this field?
- How have I learned about this field through research, classes, readings, seminars, work or other experiences, or conversations with people already in the field?
- What personal characteristics (e.g., integrity, compassion, persistence) do I possess that would improve my prospects for success in the profession?
- How have I demonstrated these characteristics?
- What are the most compelling reasons I can give for the admissions committee to be interested in me?
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TIPS TO REMEMBER
- Unifying theme is key
- Give good examples and explanations
- Help your reader understand how the information is important
- Respond to the question(s) listed on the application
- Do not duplicate information already present in your application
- Be precise and concise
- Sometimes less is more
- Use "I" and speak from the first-person voice
- Avoid clichés
- Cover any questionable/controversial subjects
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READY FOR THE INTERVIEW?
Once you’ve completed the application process, be sure to prepare for your interview.
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NEED HELP?
For more help writing your personal statement, visit the ETSU Center for Academic Achievement.